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updated draft: 20120826 now available.
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have been made in DRAFT 20120826, available at: http://www.spdx.org/wiki/spdx/specification Please let me know you spot any other concerns. DRAFT designation will be removed on Tuesday. Thanks, Kate Specific changes made to 20120826 draft: Page 9: section: 2.2.1 - typo back-to back use of "of of" - FIXED Page 15: Section: 4.5.1 - misspelling determination - FIXED Page 15: section 4.6.1 - misspelling insufficient" - FIXED Page 16: section 4.7.4 - misspelling " Preferred" - FIXED Page 17: section 4.8.4 - typo use of "on on" - FIXED Page 20: section 4.12.1 - delete "a" from ...as a "disjunctive" licenses. - FIXED Page 21: section 4.12.5 - replace "bracket s" w/"parentheses" - FIXED Page 23: section 4.15.5 & 4.15.6 - capitalize gnu c (GNU C) and add "." - FIXED Page 23: section 4.16.5 & 4.16.6 - Provide more realistic text example. - FIXED - inserted one sentence description of GNU C Library. Page 25: section 5.3.7 - </licenseId> should be </licenseName> - FIXED Page 25: section 5.3.3 - this section appears out of place. It has no label and it is position between Intent & Cardinality - REMOVED Page 26: Section 5.5.6 - misspelling "standard" -FIXED Page 28: Section 6.3.1 - typo "filein" - FIXED "file in" Page 29: Section 6.4.1 (continued) - mentions the disjunctive option but not the conjunctive option. - FIXED. added conjunctive reference. Page 33: Section 6.11.12 - fix typo-> infromration - FIXED Page 35: Section 7.1.2 - typo - forgot "." - FIXED Page 36: Section 7.3.6 - misspelling "conluded" - FIXED, and in 7.3.5 too. Appendix II: update to use 1.1-DRAFT (24 Aug 2012 17:18 UTC/6b70e2) - title updated from Vocabulary to SPDX(R) Vocabulary Specification - TM --> (R) - SdpxDocument -> SpdxDocument --- On Wed, 8/22/12, kate.stewart@... <kate.stewart@...> wrote:
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